PunkPyro912 Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 What I pray for.... I pray to go to sleep and wake up happy. I pray to go to sleep and never wake up again. I pray to go to sleep and wake up and every thing will be better. I know that when ever I go to sleep I will not dream of happiness. I know that when ever I go to sleep I will wake up again. I know that when ever I go to sleep I will wake up and all the pain will still be there. I see every one and know that they are happy. I see every one and know that I am not going to be like them, happy. I see every one and know that they will be happy tommaroww and the next day and I will not. Don't they see? Don't they see that my mutalation isn't a cry for help or attention? Don't they see that I will never be normal? Don't they see that I will never be happy? Why do they say that I will be happy? Why do they say that every thing is going to get better? I know I will never be happy. I know things arn't going to get any better. But, they still say that they care. But, they still say that they care. But, they still say that they care. They don't know me. No one knows me. They don't know how I feel They will never know. They are happy. That is why they will never know me. I am sad. They are happy. Don't they see that every time I sit down I force a smile? Don't they see that I am just I am just walking dead? Don't they see that I am just a living dead person? Don't they see that I wan't to be dead? THEY DON'T SEE. THEY ARE BLIND. THEY MAKE UP SOME GOD OR SATAN TO EXPLAIN THERE SADNESS OR HAPPIENESS. THEY DON'T SEE THAT THERE IS NO GOD NOR SATAN. THEY CAN TRY TO SEE AS HARD AS THEY CAN. THEY WILL NEVER SEE. What u guys think. Took me a long time to think that one up..... Link to comment
SkyFire Posted December 2, 2004 Share Posted December 2, 2004 If that poem is about yourself, I have advice for you: Wake up, stop wallowing in your own self-pity, get out there and do something about your unhappiness. Link to comment
PunkPyro912 Posted December 2, 2004 Author Share Posted December 2, 2004 theres nothing i can do Link to comment
SkyFire Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 theres nothing i can do WRONG So you've given up? I am sorry, I can help you no longer. You will see the light and ACT when you are ready to... I guess you are not ready now. Link to comment
lost_666 Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 what skyfire said was harsh, very harsh. but the truth! im sorry to say it but dont drown in your sorrows just wake up and live. your only 13 live for today and not whats happened in the past! if you need any more help pm or post me back! take care and keep your chin up xxx Link to comment
digital fiction Posted December 3, 2004 Share Posted December 3, 2004 Thats very emotional. But still very, very good. Youve shown alot of talent in that one poem, and I am glad I read it. Once again, well done and keep up the terrific work! Link to comment
SkyFire Posted December 4, 2004 Share Posted December 4, 2004 what skyfire said was harsh, very harsh. but the truth! The truth does not always have to be pleasant. Link to comment
PunkPyro912 Posted December 4, 2004 Author Share Posted December 4, 2004 i may only be 13 but i have more responsiblity then some 30 or 40 year olds. this is just one part of why i wrote that poem Link to comment
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