naecha Posted November 9, 2004 Share Posted November 9, 2004 Hey Everyone, It isn't the best poem in the world...but yeah!! I've nothing else to offer, so it's love to you I'll send. It's nothing that I borrowed, and it's nothing that I'd lend. It has no dollar value and can't be over used. It isn't fragile so it will not break, but often it's abused. I've given it to others, but each time it's unique. It's meaning is always different, depending on what you seek. It's something you can store away to feel when you're in need; but never is it on display, its beauty can't be seen. I'm giving it to you, no "strings attached", no "costly warranty". Because this love that I am sending has a lifetime guarantee!! Link to comment
naecha Posted November 9, 2004 Author Share Posted November 9, 2004 what do you guys think?? does it suck?? Link to comment
Mun Posted November 9, 2004 Share Posted November 9, 2004 Hi Naecha, No, it doesn't suck. It's really cute. Keep writing Link to comment
ForAnother Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 I am in love with your first lines: I've nothing else to offer, so it's love to you I'll send. It's nothing that I borrowed, and it's nothing that I'd lend. You got repetitious little lady. I like it though, its got a nice touch to it. Perhaps start with those 4 lines again, and then go into something that relates to it, and work your way back to it. I would love to see what else you write. ForAnother Link to comment
heart4chris Posted November 10, 2004 Share Posted November 10, 2004 I love it! Keep up the good work Link to comment
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