gefallener_engel Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 im not much of a poet but i write all the time... i suck... so heres a poem anyway... dont fall out of your chairs OR wet yourselves from laughing too hard... actually if it makes you happy, then go right on ahead and do that... Reach up high Catch the stars as they fall out of the sky The world is ending And my wounds aren't mending The innocent child pulled the alarm There is no real end to self-harm Look up anyway The pain will end someday Throw away your sharp toys Silver metal makes a distinct noise As it hits the bottom The look of my razors seduction is no longer modern But I can't seem to resist As I drag it accross my wrist I want to take control of my life I have control with my knife The stars fall endlessly against my wrists Like a soft, crimson angel's kiss Fallen angels cry black tears They made a mistake to fulfill all fears Like me, totally misguided They hate life and try to fight it Watch the flowers frown as I walk by I make everything worse -- don't catch my eye I tried to catch the tears that fell But you got worse, I can tell I'm sorry for the pain I've caused But you never even paused When you saw my body cut wide open On the ground my soul is broken Stars still fall all around As my lifeless body lies on the ground Close my eyes, say goodbye I've finally curled up into a ball… and died. engel Link to comment
ForAnother Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 Excellent. I love it. Lol.. a little arrogant but, you deserve to have a little of it. I liked it very much. ForAnother Link to comment
nothingontheinside Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 i like this... i really do... confused about the title however Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted November 2, 2004 Share Posted November 2, 2004 I don't know why you would say you suck, I thought that was awesome I look forward to reading your next one. Great Job. Link to comment
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