JynX Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 I wrote this when I was thinking of how it'd be like if my boyfriend and I broke up...please let me know what you think of it! Drops of sorrow hit the floor Now that you've walked out the door Tears fill the empty space As they silently splash down my face I will fight this till the end Tow whatever destiny will lend I long for a day that's gentle, soft, and kind A day when these thoughts free my mind I wish this pain would fade away All day I sit and pray Please, fade into the dark of night Leave and get out of my sight I'm crying, screaming silent words So afraid to show these fears No words, no shouts, no sound - My despair is now so tightly wound JyNx Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 Beautiful poem. It's real deep, I've experienced this before. Keep writing. under* Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 1, 2004 Share Posted October 1, 2004 wonderful poem.I hope to hear more from you in the near future. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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