i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 A face so beautiful It cannot be That this great guy Is in love with me Bleach blonde hair Baby blue eyes He spoke only truth Never uttered a lie A guy with goals His life planned out A perfect ten Without a doubt Yet something wasn't right inside It seemed all to great If only I would have known My heart broken fate Like all things This soon would end And I would have nothing Not even a friend From love and laughs To hate and lies Yet all this came From baby blue eyes Hey guys,hope ya like it.Its a "happy poem" so it wont be as good. Comments are greatly appreciated. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Trojanmn2 Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 awesome, title it with brown eyes and put brown eyes and black hair and the poem and ill be me and ill be in love with you. hahah Link to comment
lookingformyredangel Posted September 5, 2004 Share Posted September 5, 2004 I thought it was very good and seems happy(which isn't always bad you know) I love how you connect the whole thing together with the "yet all this came from baby blue eyes" at the end. nice job Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 5, 2004 Author Share Posted September 5, 2004 Thank you both for your replies. To Trojanmn2 my next poem will be called brown eyes lol ~Meagan~ Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 great job it was truly great hardcore Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 I really like that poem. Keep it up! hugs, under* Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Author Share Posted September 9, 2004 Thanx for the comments everyone.They are greatly appreciated. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
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