My Latest Poetry Attempt

[myplague234]

Hello again,

my lost and forgotten friend

you were the one i could confide in

so run along, down my arm again

make the rivers flow once again

 

ive lost all hope

and now i choke

standing on the edge again

the razorblade becomes my only friend

 

i wish for it all to end

but you, my friend

just wont stop

i cant stop

please stop

 

ive lost all chances

and now i bleed

standing on the edge again

the razorblade becomes my only friend

 

eyes black and hazed over

i wish i could reset it all

but like a bad record player

it starts over and over and over again

 

ive lost all life

and now i die

standing on the brim again

the razorblade becomes my last friend

 

 

this is more of a lyrical sense...just let me know what you think

[i_hate_the_world47]

Wonderful poem.I loved it.

 

~Meagan~

[hardcore]

i liked it if had something but i just don't know what . lol

no i think it was great 8)

[myplague234]

thank you...i try to write as well as i can with what im feeling..plus i plan on starting a band so lyrics r always good.