Falling for you

[brtlangst]

Soft and alluring

Your touch couldn't be more...welcoming

Keep me here,

Begging for more

 

Your kisses,

A wet warmth I've longed to taste

You've crept inside

A broken part of me

Gently scraping up the pieces

Of a past long pushed aside

 

Shattered and alone

I sat inside the shell,

Of a hollow being

Too scared to reach out

To feel a warm embrace

 

You found me there,

Lying prone to the world

Trapt inside a cage

Of the pain I could no longer stand to feel

 

You approached me quietly,

Reaching past the bars

Your hand patiently waiting

For a touch of compassion

 

Reluctantly I grasped your hand,

Afraid to be pushed away

You smiled knowingly,

As I gazed into your eyes

 

You saw a resemblance long desired

An understanding of the scars

Held deep inside

 

We sat there for awhile,

Holding eachother's hand

Silence sincere

To our mutual understanding

 

I reached inside my pocket,

Feeling for a cold comfort

Of the key I've long kept

Buried deep inside

 

To my surprise,

I handed the key to you

The key to the many locks and chains,

Entwined around my heart shaped cage

As I whispered slowly in your ear

I think I'm falling for you...

 

-Amie

[chantel75]

WOW- you are only 15 and you can write like that ?? I am impressed.

[hardcore]

i liked it very good keep it up ' 8) and no im not happy thanks for asking

[i_hate_the_world47]

Amamzing,i loved that poem.You have a great writing style and very good rhythm.

 

~Meagan~