the last

[hardcore]

this is it you see.

it is killing me .

love i fear has been lost to me.

as i feel the beat of my haret.

like a grain of wheat.

i have been reaped.

spare me not your pitty.

for tommrow will be sh-ty.

when i wake.

no longer to see your fase .

i fear my haret may brack.

no longer to here such a sweet reply.

i fear i have ran out of time.

o sweet bell of mine .

maybe if we were the same maybe we wouldn't play this game's

maybe i push to hard maybe you are just out of my reach.

whow i fear the nigth but not as much as the morring ligth .

to awaken not bye your side o sweet bell of mine.

is there nothing i can say to sway your way.

befor you leave .

never to come back any more .

low i feel as i roll on the floor .

praying that you will not leave.

so i am left alone.

all thow i shed no tears .

i feel the cold bitter nigth air.

come apone me .

how bitter sweet it is .

for just another love lost.

 

 

 

this is just a poem that i wrote by harcore

[Stinkweed]

This poem is great. It's really good and deep... It's got a good use of rhythm too. Cool poem =D>.

[lookingformyredangel]

[writergurl]

Very good expression. I feel your pain on this one. Some typos and misspelling make it a little hard to read but I really enjoy it. Thanks so much for sharing. this is my favorite line:

"maybe i push to hard maybe you are just out of my reach. "

It really spoke to me.

 

Thanx!

[i_hate_the_world47]

Bravo!That was a very well written poem.

 

~Meagan~

[hardcore]

thank you all you have all been really nice to me you know its hard to find a sigth were you can say whats on your mind . im sorry but this is my last post . becuse i have said some things that was not likedand one of the watchers set me straigth . i fear that i will not post any more poems for the ones that really liked them i must say i am sorry maybe we will meet in another place hopefully it will be the same name and hopefully i'll still be around . for i am a cold person and we are not aloud maybe if things were differnt we could be inmuserd in the sweet song of the haret inter twinded. but i fear not aging i am sorry

who watch's the watcher's 8) surely not me 8)

[leslieRN]

Was honest with you and broke my own heart

Sorry for this, now are we forever apart?

Deep down within my black soul

Where once was a heart, is only a hole.

 

Forever remember that day

Three words I long to say

Alas, I fear that day is gone

For you will run, till we meet is long

 

Thank you for showing me your love and how to open my heart again

I am so sorry for everything my sweet and hope in your heart you will forgive my stupidity

 

yours

me

[hardcore]

a hole is were my haret is what can i say other then you have brocken me

i really don't know time will tell for me give this we will see but im afaid this is my last post . this is it. maybe if you read this you to could forgive me . it just ant worth it .

to wake to a new dawn to bring so much pain this is why i must leave there's no more hope left for me .

gone i will stay but never out of reach. so sorry my sweet. just need to time to think. befor i get ready to say good bye.

 

for someone like you has brougth me such joy i could never have felt.

with out . but now you see its just not the time for me to let go . befor my haret gets another scare . i can only say why me.