jaiva Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 Words, Words Filling my head Tormenting my mind Let me rest Release me from your Dreadfully tight grasp Let me dream of the lilies and the roses Let me see the things unseen to the eye But only prevalent in the resting mind I must push against your hold on my mind I must release these words onto this paper I must rest Copyright ©2004 Jaiva Thoughts on this poem are appreciated. Link to comment
HaloDestroyer Posted July 29, 2004 Share Posted July 29, 2004 OH.....MY.......GOD!!! ¬_¬;; I love this. More, need more!!! MORE!!! *^_^* This is my new favourite poem.... Keep up the good work J! XxX-Ben-xXx Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 30, 2004 Share Posted July 30, 2004 Beautiful poem.It was very well written.Keep up the good work. Link to comment
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