Duderanomi Posted July 13, 2004 Share Posted July 13, 2004 Hidden Friendship It's amazing how people come through for you in the worst of times. Like a lake in the middle of the desert, you gave me salvation from the pain I suffered. I never knew what you got out of it, but many thanks are in order. Like a light in the dark Like the sun through the clouds Like the halo on an angel You lit up my somber existence. I didn't even know you, you had no clue who I was. You told me to cheer up, look forward, enjoy life. I snapped out of it because of you. I moved on, and I'm out of my strife. Like a firefly in a field. Like the moon in the night. Like headlights on a runway. You lit up my somber existence. It might be so simple. I'll never understand why you cared at all. I wrote this just about 2 years ago and was looking at it today. Makes me sad that what was once the greatest thing in my life is now argument after argument, despite my trying so hard to please her. Hell, now that I read it, it sounds pretty corny, please be honest. Link to comment
Scout Posted July 13, 2004 Share Posted July 13, 2004 What a beautiful poem. You know what it instantly made me think of? All the posters on eNotalone who have taken time to help each other in our own somber and darker moments. Even though none of us know each other. This poem is a perfect representation of eNotalone! Link to comment
Duderanomi Posted July 13, 2004 Author Share Posted July 13, 2004 It's kind of odd you should mention that, since my girlfriend is an avid poster on eNotalone. Thanks for the quick feedback! Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 That poem was wonderful.It was full of emotion.Keep writing you have talent Meagan Link to comment
boredguy Posted July 24, 2004 Share Posted July 24, 2004 Thatsa really great poem! keep it up man. scout wuz right, it does remind u of everyone on enotalone. ppl take time out of their lives to help other whom they dont even know. cheers to all posters on enotalone!! Link to comment
jaiva Posted July 26, 2004 Share Posted July 26, 2004 I like the poem it seems real. I hope your relationship gets better. But make sure that you are happy. Jaiva Link to comment
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