Praying hard for better dayz

[TheWolf]

A place to spend my quite nights-time to unwind,

so much pressure in this life of mine.

 

I cried times-i once contemplated suicied,

an i tried but when i held that knife all i could see was my mothers eyes.

 

No one knows my struggle- they only see the trouble,

not knowing it's hard to carry on when no one loves you.

 

Picture me inside the misery of poverty,

no man alive has ever witnessed struggles i survive.

 

Prayin hard for better dayz...

promised to hold on

 

 

 

 

[abcd1234]

Hi TheWolf,

 

Does that verse from Thugz Mansion mean a lot to you? I personally think that the song is great even though i am not a great fan of rap music, the words have so much meaning behind them and a lot of the messages are very emotional.

 

abcd1234

[TheWolf]

It does ...i was hopin sum1 would recognize it! Yer, Tupac is a legend, his work has much meaning and depth 8) (i can relate to that song alot...)

 

 

[tristesse]

TheWolf,

We all experienced your pain, as a matter of fact we still all do.

What's ur pain? Are you dying for someone who's not doing the same for you? Are you losing yourself for one who doesn't care to lose his? Are you giving and wasting your energy and all the love you have to give in your past? What about the future? What about all the great things waitting for you?

[TheWolf]

I have experienced the pain for 17 years, 17 long years

 

All of the above-there is no future

[tristesse]

YOU'RE ONLY 17??!??!?

How did u suffer for 17 years? do u wnat to share with me?

[TheWolf]

I would like to share with you, but can't at the moment.....

 

for now, we can share a drink

[tristesse]

when ever you'r ready!

[Princess777]

Greetings.

 

I really, really liked your poem. Someone very close to me could relate to that very much. Thank you for the reading pleasure. It was good, deep, and real.

 

You should do something with your writing ability, young person!