ang3l2004 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Everytime I think about the day that we first met, Eye to eye no looking back I knew my heart was set. Do you remember that first kiss when I began to melt, How we held eachother tight and love is what we felt. Do you remember when all we could do is stare into eachothers eyes, We shared so many things happiness,anger,sadness and cries. I still see you in my dreams and here you ring my phone, Even though we broke up I still dont feel alone. All the things we shared throughout the years Should I be happy or should I remain in tears. Thinking of our memories and all the things we shared, I knew from the first day and still now that I cared. When your done flying because now you are free, Make sure when you land you land right here with me. Make sure that you know that I still love you, Hoping that till this day that you love me to. If this is the end of our love for good, I will be here for you and you know that I would, So now that you have opened up and flew away, If your wings breaks remember what I say. I was here then and I am here today, So fly high above me until you find your way. Tell me what you think?? Link to comment
1Adam12 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Excellent..very well written ag3l Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 6, 2004 Author Share Posted June 6, 2004 Anyone else want to tell me what they think Link to comment
heartbroken_f Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 I think that was a great poem. Keep it going. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 6, 2004 Author Share Posted June 6, 2004 thankyou heartbroken thanks for replying everyone it makes me smile to know that some people like reading my poems and enjoy them I appreciate it Link to comment
heartbroken_f Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 You're welcome. I usually find that writing poems are a good way of releasing pent up emotions and sharing emotions with an audience that genuinely cares. Link to comment
Chrissy Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 I love it and found myself relating to it with personal experiance. Writing is an awesome way to release your feelings if your not that great with saying stuff verbally. That I also know first hand about. Keep up the great work. Link to comment
abcd1234 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Great poem!! I especially like the first and last verse, and all the verses in between abcd1234 Link to comment
amaranth_04 Posted June 6, 2004 Share Posted June 6, 2004 Hi ang3l I really liked that poem. These four lines esp - When your done flying because now you are free, Make sure when you land you land right here with me. I was here then and I am here today, So fly high above me until you find your way. Great use of imagery. Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted June 6, 2004 Author Share Posted June 6, 2004 Once again thanks for everyone reading and replying there opinion!! Appreciate it Link to comment
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