EmptySoul Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 This started out as a simple metaphor, then I extended it. It is a discription of how I feel about me, my life right now. Maybe you won't understand it, or like it. That's okay. I... Am an animal Caged for a lifetime Forgotten is my freedom These bars never change Never bend Never will they set me free I... Pace this cell Nowhere to go Nothing changing I only wonder What is out there- Waiting I've used all my strength All my mind All my soul *And Still I Am Not Free* THIS IS THE DEEPEST PAIN Trapped in a cage who's bars I cannot see Nor break Only growling at those who stop and stare Stop and taunt Nothing left to do But lie down and wait I lie and wait For you, The one who holds the KeY EmptySoul Link to comment
odysseus77 Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 good stuff...my college essay was very much similar to this poem Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 That was very good! I like it a lot! Under_the_Pressure you know who! Link to comment
QTpie87 Posted April 28, 2004 Share Posted April 28, 2004 i liked it a lot. good work! . bye. love Qtpie87 Link to comment
lil_unique_me Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 well done. so what makes you feel like this then? can i help you? Catie xxxx Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 i liked it, very metaphorical and then explanitory. well i liked it anyway. kel Link to comment
Caldus Posted April 29, 2004 Share Posted April 29, 2004 Wow, all of that applies to me as well. Very nice. Link to comment
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