pray for the living

[dan10]

hey guys,

i was going through some papers and came accross this that i wrote a few months ago. let me know what you think (honest opinions only please if you think it is sick and wrong please tell me. if you think it is amazing thats appreciated too)

 

all the sorrow

all the misery

all the people who fell the sadness that comes with death

they cry, they sob, and hold each other for support

everyone wants there to be respect,

but what they dont say is what everyone knows

no one will say it was his fault

no one will say it was anyone's fault

all they say is it was a horrible accident

but the fact is that it could have been prevented

could have been stopped

simple little things, he could have done

things the others could have done

to stop what is called "unreal", "horrible" and many other awful words

everyone cries for the dead

everyone says it is sad that one is dead

the sad part is nobody realizes that he was the luckiest one

the rest of the people in the car

have to live out their lives

with the guild of knowing they could have stopped his death

some are in the hospital

some are not

both know that they are to blame for their dead friend

everyone cries for the dead

everyone morns for the "victim"

i cry for those who live with the guilt

those who wish death would take them too

because it isnt fair they survived and others died

pray not for those who are in a better place

pray for those wit the emotional scars of staying here

 

 

 

 

 

anyways i just wanted to know what you guys thought of this. when i first wrote it i shared it with 2 people. my mom and my girlfriend. both said basically the same thing. they thought i was sick and twisted for thinking this way. for thinking that maybe death is a better alternative then living through the car crash that made me write this.

 

i just wanted to know if i am really sick and twisted or if maybe there are other people out there who think the same way as i do.