dazedpunk1607306446 Posted February 14, 2003 Share Posted February 14, 2003 SHIVA i never thought it would happen to you you were so full of life and energy you were immortal, and unhurtable standing there in the grey sacramento fog waiting till the yellow bus sailed by what was it like i wonder did it hurt, was there fear when i heard, i coulnt believe i would have sooner thought the moon to cease to shine and i remember the tears not mine of course, but of those around me the language i didnt understand, but i knew what was being said. not the words, the words might have been in hindi but the soul was that which matched my own your face was so pale and peaceful, i thought you would wake up and then we would laugh about it but u didnt then i was in my bedroom staring at the crack in my ceiling and fell from my eye a single moist tear Link to comment
mermayd Posted February 14, 2003 Share Posted February 14, 2003 that is so sad. What a trauma for you to lose a friend. It is always good to express these fellings when they are raw...I do have one question regarding this... and i remember the tears not mine of course, but of those around me why not your tears??? Link to comment
dazedpunk1607306446 Posted February 14, 2003 Author Share Posted February 14, 2003 i dont know. mine came later. i didnt cry until i was alone, thats all i know Link to comment
kamurj Posted February 18, 2003 Share Posted February 18, 2003 very very well written ill tell you that Link to comment
dazedpunk1607306446 Posted March 14, 2003 Author Share Posted March 14, 2003 hey ppl. i just wanna say that i entered this poem in contest and it won to become a semifinalist and its gonna be published in a book this summer called PATTERNS OF LIFE. im happy! Link to comment
saltysoo Posted June 10, 2003 Share Posted June 10, 2003 I am a neighbor of Varsha's family, and I was thinking of her today. She was so sweet and kind -- she had the most wonderful smile. Congratulations on getting your poem published. It was really touching. Link to comment
saltysoo Posted June 10, 2003 Share Posted June 10, 2003 I knew Varsha - she was so incredibly beautiful and sweet. I still think of her often . . . Congratulations on getting it published. Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted December 23, 2003 Share Posted December 23, 2003 that is truly sad that you lost someone. your writing is very good. EmptySoul Link to comment
Cid Posted December 27, 2003 Share Posted December 27, 2003 I have lost a friend just one month ago I know how you feel and what your going through. Nice poem and Grats!!!! for have it published. Link to comment
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