eterna2 Posted February 7, 2003 Share Posted February 7, 2003 Roaming through the golden plains Alone a soul to seek for thee In and within the golden grasses Never will find thy heart's key Raining teardrops from his eyes A love to stream as gentle be In and without the silver skies Night to come and no love seen ~ Eterna2 Link to comment
Santa Posted February 7, 2003 Share Posted February 7, 2003 Cool poem. This is my fav poem: And at the pearly gates, St Peter he shall tell, One more soldier reporting for duty sir, I've served my time in hell. Link to comment
kamurj Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 not bad eterna. i like it. u come up with it urself? cool of course, santa, the part about all shoulders going to hell isnt cool. i dont like war, but still, thats not cool. Link to comment
mermayd Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 Isn't hell supposed to represent earth??? Link to comment
Santa Posted February 8, 2003 Share Posted February 8, 2003 Yeah - hell is earth in the poem, cause hes a soldier fighting in world war 2 or something, and basically it means that even though life is real tough and horrible sometimes, things will get better when you go to heaven or whatever (if you believe in heaven etc). Link to comment
eterna2 Posted February 9, 2003 Author Share Posted February 9, 2003 thanks santa> true true ... but still war is not good ... killing anyone or anything is bad oh well Link to comment
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