Todays poem.

[sarey]

A fire burns,

the flames flip and turn,

like the anger inside me,

when it's bursting free.

 

Screaming, but nobody listens,

crying, yet nobody cares,

trying my hardest,

but all good deeds go unnoticed,

others are recgonized in the rest,

though why not in me?

 

Blamed for everything,

when I was only trying to help,

only trying to care,

I guess I fail at that too,

just like with most things I do.

 

I cause myself alot of pain,

half the time to discover if this is really happening,

if I'm really here,

and I never do really fear,

if that pain will cause my ending.

 

My life feels like an empty book,

pointless and full of nothing,

I'm only an existence,

worth the blame,

the flaws and the pain,

my only true meaning,

is which you are seeing,

the blame, the flaws,

and the pain...

[tiredofvampires]

Wow, this is pretty wrenching to read, sarey.

 

That makes me really sad, the part about "just trying to care"...

 

And like the image of the flames.

 

I'm so sorry you are feeling so bad, but great you are writing.

 

(hugs)

[sarey]

thanks tiredofvampires (hugs back)

 

im just feeling a bit down lately, mostly because of how crappy my school is. so i wrote a lil poem.

[k_1971]

I can relate to it too, sarey. especiallythe same part.

[girl friend]

Incredible.

I'm sorry you're feeling such negative emotions to such intensity though,

just hang in there k?

girl friend

[hosswhispra]

No doubt-you're a poet, Sarey.

[JadedStar]

Your poetry reminds me so much of mine at your age....I was so emotionally confused, torn and felt mentally beaten up.

 

Your writing is great and I hope that soon you will channel it in a more positive direction lil missy.

 

YOu are at a very difficult age to be. Fifteen was one of my toughest.