Poem

[Osiris]

Greetings,

 

Here is my poem Feel free to make comments.

 

Dedicated to imaginary girlfriend

 

The one.

 

 

Your are the one,

Who can make me smile all the way,

When you look at me you just make my day,

 

No one can make me feel so blue,

Only you

 

You are so close to me, I can hear your breathing

When you look at me I can see the love that is speaking

Speaking with me

 

Gentle touch makes you feel like you flying

O angel I never thought I will see you crying

 

You reaching me and we dance

On the empty street

 

Happy together

We are making each other complete

 

I never thought I will feel like this

Dancing all night throught

The stars is smiling

Your eyes are shining

When I am with you.

 

 

Osiris.

[lunatic]

What an beatiful poem I loved it.

 

Hubman

[Osiris]

Thanks Hubman

 

Osiris.

[jaded4life]

Nice poem!

[neva_black_n_white]

i liked the poem, its like one of those dreams you have to be in an empty open space and just be alone with someone you love. and well dance if you like to.

 

things just dont seem to happen that way any more. we wish. lol

anyway i liked it.

kel

[Osiris]

Out of a block of ivory, Pygmalion chiseled the form of a beautiful woman, Galatea. As he worked with inspired zeal a miracle happened. Galatea came to life

You Must Believe to Achieve - The Art of living - Wilferd Peterson.

[neva_black_n_white]

hey..

the quote was unique but i didnt understand it to its entirity. sorry can you kind of explain it to me.

and i would say i agree with what you put:

You Must Believe to Achieve - The Art of living - Wilferd Peterson.

kel