Just out of my reach

[reisforpeace]

This is a sonnet that I wrote, please give me some constructive criticism...

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Just Out of My Reach

 

Love is just out of my reach

I lift my hand and it flutters away

Why won’t love land and stay?

I need it to heal my chest’s only breach

To learn from love so then I can teach

New love will replace the old they always say

Well what if it doesn’t work that way?

Love is hardly as sweet as a peach.

Perhaps you are right before me

So close that I can’t even see.

To nervous to come when I call.

But be brave my love, stand up tall.

Bring faith to those who have lost hope

There still is time to help them cope.

[Gryphon]

I honestly think its beautiful.

It made me smile, thanks