Swim Away [ Song ]

[Caesium]

I haven't posted on this forum in about 2 years. Yet it's still my fave forum. Here's a little song i wrote. It's still a working progress, any feedback is welcome. I do have a guitar tune for this song, I just can't sing so i ain't gonna record it

 

 

Verse

 

All These feelings we've had

Have lasted so long now

But it's over again

But it's over now.

 

 

Chorus

 

And Your lost at sea now

I can see you swimming from me

Baby, can't you see

What i need , is real.

 

Verse

 

Standing behind glass

Watch you fade and pass

And all that's left to say

Is how you want me to stay

 

 

Ending

And you swim away now

And you swim away

And you swim away now

And you swim away

[RayKay]

Reminds me of something like David Gray would do....particularly some of his older stuff.

 

Would be good with the right voice and tune