Slain67 Posted October 30, 2003 Share Posted October 30, 2003 Hey. I was thinking of this girl I liked and came up with this: ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Why I Love You I love you! How can I describe my love? Is it possible with words? How can I tell you how you make me feel? Well, heres a start... I love the way you bright up the room when u walk in it, I love the way you smile at me, letting me know everything will be fine, I love the way your eyes glisten like the swirl of the stars in the sky, I love the way you think, always thinking of others, I love the way you make me laugh, until my skin turns blue, I love the way you are, no matter what anyone thinks I love the way you make me feel, like the king of the world I love you! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Well, thats it. It may not be great and I'm sure you've heard some of it in other peoms before, but it helps express how I feel right now. Maybe I'll write an even better poem later. Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crookster_man Posted October 30, 2003 Share Posted October 30, 2003 It's nice, I like it. simple and sweet, girls love that stuff. Use your power only for good ;o) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anamarie89 Posted October 30, 2003 Share Posted October 30, 2003 It makes me feel like... dancing rainbows... and unicorns... can you come be my boyfriend for a day... or fifty? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
just_smile Posted October 30, 2003 Share Posted October 30, 2003 hey =D> i thought that it was really good, thanks for sharing it with us. =D> hope you write more ~LJ =; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slain67 Posted October 30, 2003 Author Share Posted October 30, 2003 Wow, thanks for the responses. I appreciate your complements. I'm inspired to write some more now lol. I have an idea for a poem that I will post up later...btw, are am I allowed to post another poem in a new topic or do I have to post it in a reply in this thread? Thanks again guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crookster_man Posted October 30, 2003 Share Posted October 30, 2003 More is always good. You can post a new poem in a new thread. But you can only post one every few hours so that you only have 1 post on the index page. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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