Hold me in your arms once again

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Yups its not great i know, but i was thinking about someone when i wrote it, yeah yeah i'm a dork i know.

 

Watching the way you turn your head,

That cute little smile,

Your eyes such a beautiful blue,

These feelings are just so true,

They can't fade,

No these emotions will stay,

Even after you run away.

 

So tonight i ask,

Please don't run away just yet,

Can't you stay,

Just a little while longer,

Hold me in your arms once again.

 

I can tell what your thinking,

Just a glance in your direction,

Lets me know what your wishing,

Lets me know how you feel,

I see through you,

You see through me,

But the day will come,

You leave for the last time.

 

So tonight i ask,

Please don't run away just yet,

Can't you stay,

Just a little while longer,

Hold me in your arms once again.

 

Do you remember your card game phase,

That dorky shirt you loved so much,

What about that first girl,

Who broke your heart,

But made you stronger,

I remember,

I remember and always will,

How i held your hand,

And made you laugh,

Don't you walk away.

 

So tonight i ask,

Please don't run away just yet,

Can't you stay,

Just a little while longer,

Hold me in your arms once again.

 

ohh tonight i ask,

Hold me in your arms once again.

[Zackinlaw]

Nice poem on infatuation!!!

 

Zack.

[ButterflyWrists]

Good poem. I can almost see it happening. See that poem out loud, like a scene being played.

 

well done. Hardly any poems make me do that.

[mercyplz]

nicely written...=)

 

tho it's sad...

 

keep it up..god bless you

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Haha thankyou all. I have always wondered how i end up with more comments are the pieces i don't like.. Ahhh well its always nice to read what people think of your writing