Boughs Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 I was kind of a fool... rushed in too fast. Not quite spilled my heart out, but I definitely let this girl know what I was looking for. She wanted time to get to know me, which is what I was thinking, but I jumped the gun by mentioning a relationship could come of it. Kind of freaked her out/turned her off a bit. So it goes... well here is a poem for it. Soft Speed Words so strong I defy my collective’s true thoughts Where I get up and get down. I decide where my pace and power Place a slit in my folly. Shrugged shyness off Brushing away brash bright eyes Set and focused Sauntering away in water, I won’t blink it Link to comment
Bunney Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 Very thoughtful indeed... Wish I was that good at wording. Link to comment
Boughs Posted September 19, 2007 Author Share Posted September 19, 2007 Thanks Bunney. I really like Cummings. The randomness of his words are beyond anything I've ever read... he is thus one of my favorite poets. Link to comment
Portage Posted September 20, 2007 Share Posted September 20, 2007 Moving I enjoyed this Boughs sometimes the sweetest things in life are those we wait patiently for I'm STILL trying to become a pro in this field. Link to comment
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