Still believing

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Dreams always have a happy ending,

As did the fairy tales mummy read me,

So i was not prepared,

To find out that in me love you might not see.

 

The princesses always got their prince,

No one ended up alone,

Sometimes i wish my nightmares,

Were the only happy endings shown.

 

Only so i would understand,

That happiness might not be true,

That i am not a princess,

That my love might not be returned by you.

 

I know that its not right,

And i know it will never be,

Yet these fairy tales still have me believing,

That someday you'll see something special in me.

 

Its a silly little thought really,

I should know better then this,

But i would do anything,

To have just one love stricken kiss.

 

I think about the night you held me,

I think about the times you made me smile,

I thought those smiles would last forever,

But they only lasted such a short while.

 

And now your gone,

And i have been left alone again,

But i won't let you see my tears,

No one shall know my pain.

[TheFallenShadow]

Broken,

 

Very good, i like the point you make in these verses...how deeply do some of us feel, while others only know whats skin deep.

 

keep writing, i very much like to read your prose.

 

Fallen

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thanks fallen, its a bit soppy not much like my normal writing just a tad broken hearted at the moment so it just sorta came out that way.

 

Ahh well more people out there

[TheFallenShadow]

No need to say your sorry for being soppy, we all have those days, and heart broken, yes it does seem to be the way most for poets, at times i think, through the pain, is how you express the inner most feelings and at the same time find thats something that help ease the pain as well.....

keep writing, and as for more people out there...then good for you to keep trying...i personally am done, i will not shed more tears, nor feel my heart break again.....

 

Be well my friend...

[candidvibe]

I Think Your Poem Is Very Beautiful And Has Lots Of Truth To It.

Thanks For Posting It

[AnotherBrokenDoll]

Thankyou for your comments.