swtangel980 Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 When life's completely turned over and lifes lessons is more than just one when it's all games and no longer fun when you are so helpless and alone there when its not what you want and it never ends up fair why cant i change it i hate thinking of the past and asking questions like 'whyd it go by so fast' where my hearts been and will never again go how i dont want to feel i will never drop so low my minds racing but i cant think when the bombs gonna drop and my heart will slowly sink Where my hearts eaten and swallowed by prde When i will no longer fight the me on the inside When i think to stay away and my heart feels the same i want to fight this feeling i dont claim What do i do for the rest of my being i wanna look away but i cant stop seeing!! Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted September 28, 2003 Share Posted September 28, 2003 hey i think that was a great poem, relevant and simple but procise and to the point. i really liked it. its too much like reality, but then again it gives you a kick back into the real world and what we should care about and think of. thanks very empowering. kel Link to comment
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