sarey Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 Clinging to that rope, the rope I have left, all others disappeared, leaving me for death. The rope almost breaking, tears I shred, feeling the hot tears down my cheeks, wondering how I was led, led to this end. As I hold on tighter, the rope gets thinner, the strings break, soon, I'm no longer to be here. It snaps, I fall, I scream and cry, I try to call, no one hears, I'm left, abandoned to die. Link to comment
mumble Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 "you would never sleep at night if you knew what I've been through and this thought is all I have to trust upon when light is gone" -For My Demons by Katatonia Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 'The Rope'...did you write that sarey? It's really well written. A beautiful poem expressing emotions. I think many could relate it, I certainly can. If you wrote this, keep writing honey, it's awesome. Indigo_Scar Link to comment
Locke2121 Posted June 23, 2007 Share Posted June 23, 2007 Eerily beautiful.... I'm sure that rope is alot stronger than you think. Link to comment
indigo_scar Posted June 24, 2007 Share Posted June 24, 2007 Well done with it. =D I love it when you have moments where the words just appear into your head and flow down onto the page. Link to comment
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