Gnosis

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This is a poem I have recently written. I'd much appreciate any feedback positive or negative. Thanks in advance. The apple of my eye Does not compare to thee The most beautiful words Can't comprehend her soul As to unite with her Is being united with the divine Aslong as she breathes My heart beats Aslong as she sings My heart dances Though we haven't known eachother long Space and time are not a barriers to which we belong For my love for her is what holds the universe in place Even if we were to part, She'd always have my heart.