KissMe_KillMe Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 i have not made a title for it yet. I lost myself along time ago It was when you finally let me go You held me close and watched me cry I should have known you would let me die I cant bare to see your face today For I feel that I am wasting away I rot in my room searching for a clue A reason for all the things you do I miss you more than I can take And you should know by this smile I fake I want to take you back so bad And recreate the things we had Its time for you to make your choice Its me or her My love is your voice. Link to comment
chai28jm Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 that was nice. i like it Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted October 30, 2006 Share Posted October 30, 2006 thats a great first poem... Very sad but a great use of emotions! Link to comment
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