sumguy Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 I’m on the edge of this ditch the void seems so deep about to swallow me whole is my mind playing tricks on me? one step separates me i’m neither here nor there how do i make my decision with my head filled with fear? I’m caught in this deep desperation there’s no going back now I cover my ears, the silence hurts them it’s like an act! stand up! take a bow! but where is the worthy audience? is anyone there? I need help Link to comment
NJRon Posted September 16, 2006 Share Posted September 16, 2006 I like that a lot and can really identify with "We're a pair of intimate strangers" ... nicely done. Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted September 17, 2006 Share Posted September 17, 2006 Thats kool. Go you i would never have thought of all those words that rythme! Link to comment
Ms. Babydoll Posted September 17, 2006 Share Posted September 17, 2006 I really love it, especially the first verse (of whatever you want to call it) beautifully writin, well done! Link to comment
doyathink Posted September 18, 2006 Share Posted September 18, 2006 I like that a lot and can really identify with "We're a pair of intimate strangers" ... nicely done. LOL, I can too. Link to comment
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