My shop

[Dako]

Distracted and weary

defenses all down

A benevolent thief

cleaned out this clown

 

Lightning strike on a cloudless day.

 

They entered by skylight

As angels must do

To take what sat idle

and swiftly they flew.

 

Thank you, come again!

[Daddy Bear]

wow, that bites. somebody needs a good emasculating with a dull knife.

[vandgsmom]

Why can I not read that last line without the Chinese accent?

 

I loved it...

[Dako]

I was channeling my friend Victor Heredia, from Mumbai.

A metaphorical theft.

[NJRon]

Is 'Thank you, come again!' part of the poem? If so... I now can't get rid of the chinese accent.

 

Though, then again.. I took 2 years of russina in school. My teacher was mongolian... I met with my small business advisor who spoke russian. We started talking and he started laughing at me. he said... you're speaking russian with a chinese accent.

 

So.. maybe chinese accents come naturally now...

 

any way... I like the lightning strike from a clear sky visual... very effective.

[Ms. Babydoll]

Great poem, simply perfect and fresh

[orgasmictofu]

Chinese accent? I heard Apu!

[brando]

Dako,

 

 

I liked the poem, "Lightning strike on a cloudless day." Nice imagery here.

 

 

and i liked your line in the second post you made..."metphorical theft" ...truly a dakoism....

[Daddy Bear]

Chinese accent? I heard Apu!

haha, you beat me to it.

[yeawutever]

Stares in amazement............WOW!!!!!!!!!!