AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Is help really help when it cuts you deep inside? Is life really worth living when your whole life you have lied? Each day i look back wishing to change my heart, Just wanting to smile, Just to feel good for a little while. Yet somewhere hidden behind each scar, Is just a beat of happiness, A shining star. Link to comment
NKP Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Good as, i love it, i can relate to it a whole lot Take care, kita Link to comment
nottoogreen Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Hi Rozi!, Feels optimistic but restrained. Let the stars out! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 16, 2006 Author Share Posted August 16, 2006 My stars are my friends. Thanks for your comments! Link to comment
sumguy Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 I liked it, especially: "Is life really worth living when your whole life you have lied?" Good poeming! =) Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 i dont think its need to be altered. its really beautiful. i liked it its quite exposing, brave. smiles* more than i could ever do! Link to comment
AnotherBrokenDoll Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 Thankyou everyone, but its true and i guess i only realised that a little while ago... Theres alwayz happiness even where theyre is pain! Link to comment
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