EmptySoul Posted August 7, 2006 Share Posted August 7, 2006 link removed it's all come down to this nothing to do but wait it's all come down to this nothing to hold but faith oh i've got so little time and i've got so few beliefs it's all come down to this, babe... i've taken a jump from the highest story the air up there too thin to breathe and i'm not sure if i'll fly or fall- but this jump means everything. This is definitly not one of my best...I don't really like to write rhyming poetry, but I can't seem to get this out any other way. -E. Link to comment
BrokenWingedFaery Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 I like it grrrly, I haven't commented on your other stuff, but I have read it and I like it. This is my favorite part: i've got so little time and i've got so few beliefs it's all come down to this, babe... i've taken a jump from the highest story the air up there too thin to breathe and i'm not sure if i'll fly or fall- but this jump means everything. Edited because my grammar and spelling mistakes had crazy rabbit sex and their kids popped up EVERYWHERE. Link to comment
NKP Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 I loved it, it made me get tears in my eyes it brought back memories Link to comment
yeawutever Posted August 8, 2006 Share Posted August 8, 2006 I love it, it made me smile!!!!!!!!! Link to comment
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