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it's all come down to this

nothing to do but wait

it's all come down to this

nothing to hold but faith

oh

i've got so little time

and i've got so few beliefs

it's all come down to this, babe...

i've taken a jump from the highest story

the air up there too thin to breathe

and i'm not sure if i'll fly

or fall-

 

but this jump means everything.

 

 

This is definitly not one of my best...I don't really like to write rhyming poetry, but I can't seem to get this out any other way.

 

-E.

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I like it grrrly, I haven't commented on your other stuff, but I have read it and I like it.

 

This is my favorite part:

 

i've got so little time

and i've got so few beliefs

it's all come down to this, babe...

i've taken a jump from the highest story

the air up there too thin to breathe

and i'm not sure if i'll fly

or fall-

 

but this jump means everything.

 

 

 

Edited because my grammar and spelling mistakes had crazy rabbit sex and their kids popped up EVERYWHERE.

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