bubbles Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 Could you be the one for me? Could you be my find? Could it be, after all this time, Fate is going to be kind? Could you be the one for me, The one to help me forget The man that broke my heart, my soul The man that haunts me yet? You tell me that I'm beautiful Something I've never heard But the one still lives here in my mind That couldn't spare a kind word It's going to be hard to forget And pick up the pieces he left Could you be the one to teach How to love again and forget? Could you be the one to come And mend my broken heart? Are you willing to piece together What another broke apart? It won't be an easy job, you see My road has been long and rough And the heart that was once so soft Is now shut, locked, and tough But I can feel my heart open again It's opening for you Just come in, and love me back That's all you have to do I must ask you one small thing Before we kiss and part Please be nice and kind to me I'm tired of broken hearts Link to comment
FTT Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 That is a really nice poem, i like it. Looks like you got a good thing going for you, keep it up. Link to comment
swtangel980 Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 thats a reallly good poem!!!! your a good writer! and i feel exactly what u are saying in it Link to comment
Insomniac Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 ***** awww, this is so incredibly sweet!!! You're a good writer. This poem has good rhytmn and rhyming. I'm a poet too, but usually I writer about morbid stuff... Link to comment
DealingWithIt Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 like the words to your poem...nice! Link to comment
EternalGrace Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 Wow, that's wonderful! I'm a writer as well. There's nothing better than picking up a guitar, or pen and paper, and expressing yourself. I actually have a poem that is being published in a book of poetry, much to my surprise. Well done, I can feel it! Link to comment
Sonic_Chaos Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 Wow that was a touching peom i wright but i wright storyies like as it was a game to be played like FF 7 if any one played it Link to comment
Happy_Go_Lucky_Heb Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 Yea.. the words are really deep and meaningful. I luv it. U should share some more wif us, we'd luv 2 hear it. Happy Heb Link to comment
neva_black_n_white Posted August 3, 2003 Share Posted August 3, 2003 that was a great poem i could really relate to it. it would be nice to hear anything else you have. keep it up its a real winner. Link to comment
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