secret_agent_man Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 I tend to just write in a notebook right now, while my life is decided elsewhere... -------- As I lie at the rock bottom of my life, I realize more than ever before. I stare into the face of the 'beast' that is Life and say: "I laugh at you. You can take everything that is 'me', but you can not have my soul. In my soul is an undying love. This can't be taken from me. "Life, no matter what you do with her from here on, you won't be able to take that, so you are powerless against me. You can tear my flesh, break my bone, but I won't give up that soul. It's not wandering any more. "So you can tear her from me if you must, I am prepared for battle. I know even if you succeed in taking her, I will not have lost the fight. My soul and the love inside can not be angry, it can only continue to love her. "Her soul may wander, and even if you take it from her, I will give her mine. Even then, when you destroy me, I will still have won, for my soul will live through her. "So I say again, you are powerless, Life. You do not control all of me. You can't control all of me. I realize now, that as hard as it may be to fight you, I will not lose, for she will still be flying high above you, just beyond your reach." So I climb to my feet and begin again. "Throw your worst at me, Life, burn me with a fire beyond hell, I win." ------------------ S.A.M. Link to comment
foreverurz23 Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 well i am really into my own peotry also and i think alot of people are but they are just way to afraid to say anything. i read it and i think its wonderful! hope you become famous someday! ~foreverurz23~ Link to comment
secret_agent_man Posted July 16, 2003 Author Share Posted July 16, 2003 It's not really for anyone else, or for fame. It's for me to figure out what is going on in my life right now, but I appreciate the respect. S.A.M. Link to comment
foreverurz23 Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 i know, but i think its awsome so matter if its for you to figure out something in your life, i just respect a good poet and a good advice giver Link to comment
BananaRamma01 Posted July 16, 2003 Share Posted July 16, 2003 I understand EXACTLY what you're going through... life is trying to steal the love of my life away, and I simply refuse to let that happen. I admire your work, and I just want you to know that my life is right now in your work. Thank you and keep it up. Always... BananaRamma01 Link to comment
basschic23 Posted July 17, 2003 Share Posted July 17, 2003 i also enjoyed it very much. deep. It's also good to know that you are not writing just for money or something liek that. It's good to share your poems tho. 8) [/i] Link to comment
fenstrt Posted July 18, 2003 Share Posted July 18, 2003 I know how that is, I'm going through the same thing. very nice words. I personally feel that any type of writing that expresses such deep emotion is poetry, so you can't really say that isn't poetry. brought a tear to my eye. beautiful wrods from a great guy on these forums. Link to comment
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