Outcast-Angel Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 These Dreams by outcast-angel why can't you feel these dreams the way i do? why can't you feel the despair the pain and cruelty as sharp and poignantly as i do? feel the love and loss, the seething hatred and numbing shock when i do? why can't you taste these bitter thoughts when i see you there beside me? why can't you taste the salt of our skin, in my tears, in my blood the bitterness of betrayal, of your love, in our words and curses why can't you see these sick parodies we put ourselves through? why can't you see the tenderness, the violence in our acts of love and of hate the spinning, dizzy confusion dance we spin into our world why can't you hear our voices ringing throughout my memory? why can't you hear the softness in my words, the possessiveness in yours the sound of flesh hitting flesh, over and over the sound of pain, the hollowness in your eyes Link to comment
Serendipity1607307077 Posted January 7, 2006 Share Posted January 7, 2006 Very passionate! It's wonderful and heartfelt. Keep up the good work. Link to comment
Outcast-Angel Posted January 7, 2006 Author Share Posted January 7, 2006 Very passionate! It's wonderful and heartfelt. Keep up the good work. ^_^ thank you.. i don't think i want to write any new poems on the same subject though. it's twisted, but i miss him, especially when i start writting poems like that. i guess cause i have to dredge up all the emotions. re-live them all. maybe i'll edit an older one. Link to comment
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