Wrote this for my g/f..is it worthy to give?

[Ravenshadow]

Your eyes are beautiful

Seemingly indescribable

So soft and pure

So innocent they're allure

Your skin so soft so smooth

Your touch is that to soothe

And your hair so long

Your entity captures me and leaves my heart in a throng

Watching you move is like watching a dance

I thank the heavens for giving me the chance

To be by your side and hold you close

And be in your embrace

Taste your sweet honey breath to my lips

And feel my heart sink as it dips

Never do I want to let go

And I just want you to know

I love you

And I'll never let go of you

[ezila]

I have yet to be less than impressed by *ANY* of the pieces you've posted thus far.

 

Go for it. If she's not thrilled, then she's not worth you wasting your talents upon.

[biasedidiot2]

r u a pro or somthin jeez im 1 best poets at school and thats good. give it 2 her

[Ravenshadow]

dude I'm 14. the day i become a pro..I'll laugh

But thank you