dpressedone89 Posted July 7, 2005 Share Posted July 7, 2005 RAGDOLL the child sits in a quiet room as his parents scream inside echoes taunting though his clouded mind the scars are covered but the pain cannot hide they through him around they made him cry the stitches broken open a silent promise he cannot deny marks appear on his forehead his arms are still unnoticed keep it in the family child if you know whats good for you so he never said a word he always screamed inside the pain finally escaped the night she died the one he had turner to now she turned away she lay there unmoving his final thoughts, his final day -sTITChEs really personal, something i needed to get out please tell me what you think Link to comment
deviousj420 Posted July 7, 2005 Share Posted July 7, 2005 this is quite disturbing... what is wrong? i just read a true crime book that took place in fl in 1993 a stepmother abused her 10 yrd old boy then he wound up dead.... it was called "No one can hurt him anymore" it was a very bothersome read, though i couldnt put it down... tell someone, what is wrong? are you ok? are you being harmed? dont wait until it is to late.... talk to someone who can help you... dont be afraid... being quite will kill you! speak up! what is thee matter? imlike stressed over this now.... are you ok? Link to comment
From_Now_On Posted July 7, 2005 Share Posted July 7, 2005 it's very good. very sad. i could relate to a lof of it...if you ever need to talk please, please feel free to PM me. I don't know if you wrote this as the one IN the situation, but if you are, believe me, I've been in a similar place and I'm more than willing to listen. TAKE CARE, -FNO Link to comment
QTpie87 Posted July 8, 2005 Share Posted July 8, 2005 it's really sad to read, but good at the same time. What is on your mind that is bothing you so much though, im really sorry you feel like this. awesome poetry though, like always. Qtpie87 Link to comment
Love Her Like Crazy Posted July 9, 2005 Share Posted July 9, 2005 I can relate personally, and I do sympathize. I spent the first years of my life severely abused by my father and 30 years later I am just learning to come to grips with it through very intensive therapy. In reading your poem, I wanted to comment and that I do understand now through therapy and hypnotic regression/recall what it feels like to be a very very very lonely and very frightened child with no one to turn to......... Also as deviousj420 has stressed. If this is a situation that is current it can be repaired and it can be corrected. Link to comment
Protex Posted July 9, 2005 Share Posted July 9, 2005 Very well written. Depressing, but well written. Link to comment
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