Cherry_punker1621 Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 ok.... a frend of a frend i guess you could say died not too long ago and i made this poem for him so tell me if its good! Dear lord protect our donnie dear. We all loved him thats why we teared,we wont forget his smileing face, and no one will , or can take his place, to see him go was really hard,but were glad deep in our hearts, for knowing that you'll keep him safe, wipes the tears right off our face!!!! we love you donnie Link to comment
LuvstuffNStuff Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 The words that come from the heart are the best words to ever be heard. Its a very nice poem and I am sure your friend would think the same, I am so sorry for your loss. Good job on the poem Link to comment
Millerm Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 yea i agree that was a very good poem..My sisters best friend died about a month ago. she was like a sister to me. well.....that was a good poem and im very sorry for your loss and im going through the same thing. Link to comment
Cherry_punker1621 Posted May 28, 2005 Author Share Posted May 28, 2005 Thank You! It was one of my favorite poems i have ever wrote! I kno if donnie herd it he would thatnk the same! Thanx alot! Link to comment
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