inspiration Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 to be someone better than you// that's what i wish for// I want to rub it in when I get there// You always said I wouldn't make it// My games and views meant nothing to you// How come you don't call?// Oh wait... you're too spineless to answer.// **** it... if you did call I wouldn't even answer// This is me taking everything into consideration that you've done.// Oh and what's that letter you worked up the balls to send me about god?// Let me tell you something about him// not everyone believes the same thing// So if I ever want to find him... I'll remember your name// Wait... I'll just buy the book that way I don't have to taste your name// So take your letter back that your new wifey wrote for you// And don't bother sending another ~ I don't appreciate your views// You can blame yourself for my lack of respect// Realize once you ditch your kid you can't get him back// So if you see me don't bother saying how proud you are of me// I'll stick to my own business and if your lucky... I may say hi// But you mean nothing to me now, dad// Sincerely not yours// From the son you'll wish you could have. this freewrite//poem is true, but by no means am I torn apart about my dad not being in my life, just something that i thought I could express and attack on in a good fashion. .ins Link to comment
ang3l2004 Posted January 30, 2005 Share Posted January 30, 2005 Alot of emotion if u need to talk message me because I dont really know my dad either good luck! Link to comment
Delaurence23 Posted February 3, 2005 Share Posted February 3, 2005 shows great emotion and shows how much an A** your dad was great Link to comment
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