Yep...another poem. shorter this time though ;)

[From_Now_On]

It's oh-so-poetic

Another day's cliché

Yet here I stand pathetic

I just can't turn away

 

It's oh-so-glittered

Another batch of beautiful mistakes

Yet here I stand littered

With the sparkle that it makes

 

It's oh-so-appealing

Another jeweled and jagged lie

Yet here I stand without concealing

That its glow has caught my eye

 

It's oh-so-convincing

Another chance to fail again

Yet here I stand unwincing

Resolved to take it in

 

It's oh-so-wordy

But the point I mean to rise:

Pain rarely comes undecorated

Yet here I stand and celebrate it

 

…Transfixed by its disguise…

 

My friend,

Be not so seduced

As undoubtedly am I

 

(My apologies for posting yet another poem currently lacking a title. As always, suggestions for a title are welcome. Especially Mr Mister1 whom was a great help last time than that...feel free to comment/criticize. Thanks to all.)

[under_the_pressure]

I don't have any ideas for a title, sorry. I'm not good at naming poems, either.

 

I liked the repition; It's Oh-so...

 

I enjoyed reading this poem.

 

under*

[From_Now_On]

It's fine that you don't have a title idea, I just wanted to let people know I didn't mind if they offered one. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the comment.

 

=)

[Meow18]

Like under, I liked the repitition of the "oh-so" as well. I thought this was a really good poem.

 

Sorry, I can't think of a title either. The only thing I could think of that you could call it is "Oh-So". I don't know if thats what you are looking for though.

 

Keep sharing your poems. THey are very fun and interesting to read.

[From_Now_On]

just thought I'd add that I have come up with a name for it now.

 

"Oh-So-Seduced"

[Meow18]

Thats a good title! Thanks for letting us know.

[From_Now_On]

No problem.