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How come I'm here?

taking up space

I don't serve a purpose

I'll never get a date

No one likes me

and I don't like them

It all seems to me

one great big scam

They all smile acting like nothings wrong

but I know what they are thinking

why don't you just run along....

the endless story of

not thinking right

making everything wrong

trying to stay out of sight

and its this day

that i truly remark

why the HELL

did my life start...

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That was good, almost sounded like it came from personal experience and that you put your own emotions into the poem. If you have anymore, I'll be sure to read them. If you want, a title I can think of would be something like Life's Sorrows or Why? or something like Pupose to My Life

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