heart Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 On Second Thoughts Memories like fuel In the present day confusion To look back, seeking comfort For what lies ahead is unsure All that was lost is gone All that is gained is temporary Like the sweetest love I have ever tasted Now so far from my lips Let me know what you think,, i'm new at writing,, so all comments are helpful,, have a great day! Link to comment
thatguy04 Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 New at writing? Your very good for "new" at writing. Infact, you should check this site out, link removed. It has amature poets, contests, etc. for poets like ourselves. If you want to see mine, pm me and I'll show you. If you make more, I'll be sure to read them. Link to comment
Gauchori Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 Caount me in as well. I'll shore like to read some poems for once in a while. I haven't writen much latelly because of all the things I have been doing... Very busy (in simple words) So, yeah... you should check that site out and maybe even send this very poem for them Link to comment
behind_these_eyes Posted November 16, 2004 Share Posted November 16, 2004 hey, I thought that was awesome whether your're new or not. You said a lot with few words, and that's really hard to do. Great job, looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Link to comment
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