HeLlO i LuV yOu Posted October 30, 2004 Share Posted October 30, 2004 Im not feeling to good about myself today... I rarely do... Im always so upset. So i wrote some. i have a whole lot of notebooks filled w/ my poetry, but here are some of my favorites: This poem won me a really big poem contest... Hope you like it... I wrote it when I was 12. (((Just last year))) A life without a life BY: ME All my life Ive lived With a hole Just buried in my heart. Nobody got it through my art of silence and pain. Though there was nothing To gain, the rain still thrashed down on the dark cold ground. The tears Still fell right before you, but You just looked away. The light of a new day is always ruined with dark silence. The light of the candle, always fades away. Every time I try to spread my wings and fly away, Im always held back by your torment of hell. I try to break free, but nobody can see my life, without, a life. ^not that good... oo well...^ I wrote this one when I was in the 2nd grd... haha... people thought I was going to kill myself! (((yet, I didnt kno that I could... ))) The Loss. BY: ME As I walk down the rain-slick road I'm lonely, wet, and cold, for I have a friend that I may never hold. She has a new friend. She abandoned me in a dark, dark place, and left me there to cry. She left me there to die! Not just me but, everybody that she knew. But much, much worse ... she didn't say good-bye. ^ICKY!^ I just wrote this one, but it isnt very good! Take me off the bridge BY: ME I cant see the light. Im in the dark. I can feel you, but I cant see You. The pain is shooting up my body. I can feel it in my spine. You tell me that your mine, but thats what you always say. You tell me that you dont mind, but I Know you do. Behind the door the secrets hide. Its hidden in my mind, a place You will never find. Yet, you always Seem to... Im not to tollerant to the ways that You hurt me. Im not to tollerant to the ways that you taunt me. So go back from where u came, just taim yourself! And push me off a bridge, Into a lake, where you can leave me And my thaughts alone. haha... tell me if you like them... actually... they arent my favorites... I have better ones... oo well.... -me- Link to comment
gefallener_engel Posted October 30, 2004 Share Posted October 30, 2004 nice!! keep it up Link to comment
Wagga Posted October 30, 2004 Share Posted October 30, 2004 Hello there... Your poetry is deep and meaningful. But why are you feeling sad all the time? Writing down your emotions is a superb way of expressing exactly how you feel. But I was wondering why you say you are sad? Link to comment
naecha Posted October 31, 2004 Share Posted October 31, 2004 I have one poem...it's sort of crap though! I had one about about dieng..but I lost the book! Longing For Him When I see him I long to be near him. When he smiles My head spins for miles. When he talks From my ears go the corks. When he cries I can hear the lies. If I get the courage And I friends don't discourage. Maybe I can approach And I'll wear my best brooch. There was more..but I can't remember it! It's pretty crap though, I was 13 and talking like that...how sad! Link to comment
Serendipity1607307077 Posted October 31, 2004 Share Posted October 31, 2004 Love poetry!!! Link to comment
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