Delaurence23 Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 dark music dark shadows as i unfold the deepness of my voice smothered in a dark ocean of waves rocking back and forth on a cold white cap that circlulates the ice in my veins i bleed the crimson tears from the pores of my body as the streams are hidden under my skin i am fine i am within the holy water no longer works i am a rebound of the holyness the sin the punishment i am fine within send me to hell... Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 wow such a deep poem.very well written.Great job. ~meagan~ Link to comment
ladyluck Posted October 10, 2004 Share Posted October 10, 2004 your poem was absolutely amazeing. i adore poems that deal with anguish or anything of that sort. never stop it is an art you are mastering Link to comment
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