poem please read and reply thanks=)

[ang3l2004]

I feel so alone and empty inside of my heart,

I have thought about the past and why we are apart.

 

I think about the way things use to be,

I was with you or you were with me.

 

I think about the ways that you always made me smile,

Even though we are apart I have felt this way for awhile.

 

When I am down and I feel like crying,

I remind myself im living and that I'm not dying.

 

But still I feel like a part of me has been taken away,

I think about you each and every day.

 

I hope that you notice that I do still care,

That I have not forgotten the things we use to share.

 

Mabe oneday we can try to work things out,

Dont ever think that we cant never have any doubt.

 

I hope you know that you still have my whole heart,

Nothing has changed I have loved you from the start.

 

I might act like I am fine and I have moved on by,

But when I think about you I begin to cry.

 

I know that I will always and forever be here for you,

Anything that happens I will be right here all the way through.

 

So I wish apoun a star that you are thinking of me,

That oneday we will both open our hearts and minds to see.

 

So I want to let you know that you are my soul mate,

I am counting on our love for one another no longer fate.

 

tell me what you think?? by me

[justtwicethen]

 

 

 

Hey, Im not normally the mushy type but...

 

I have to admit that this poem just brought tears. It's funny how I was just thinking about the times I once shared with her...so I just went to this website and here it is. The most beautiful poem I think I have ever read.

 

It hurts doesn't it? I mean...those times when you and your loved one are inseparable...and then suddenly, it's all gone. A distant memory.

 

*sigh* I don't think I can even describe in words, how much I miss my girl. But I guess thats what makes love so different, so special....it can heal the weakest but can destroy even the strongest.

[lunatic]

I loved this one Ang3l you have a talent sweety. Please keep up the great work.

 

Hubman 8)

[lunatic]

Wow what a wonderful peom it made me tear up. You have a way with your words. Please keep writing.

 

Thanks,

Luny

[ang3l2004]

aww thankyou all so much im so glad that you all enjoy reading my poems and thanks for the comments they are always so nice

[i_hate_the_world47]

Amaxing poem.It made me cry,in a good way.

 

~Meagan~