Ground3d Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Simple melodies relieve the ache I suffer from Soothing my soul Simple Melodies I look around through my sky blue eyes Seeing the world in black and white Everything is either Dead or Alive Everything is Either Horrible or Perfect I grip the blade tightly It slices through my wrist like a hot knife through butter Death knocks on my door My death, my suicide I smile as I breath my last breath I am sleeping forever Never waking up. Looking at my lifeless corpse in Hell Wishing I never chose a permanent answer Link to comment
melodystar22 Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Very depressing. Fortunately we all know that isnt the answer to life's problems. right? RIGHT? Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 great poem.It was depressing but i could relate very well. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
EmptySoul Posted September 17, 2004 Share Posted September 17, 2004 Good job. I can relate. I like: Seeing the world in black and white Everything is either Dead or Alive and the last line: Wishing I never chose a permanent answer Thanks for writing Empty Link to comment
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