Gauchori Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 This poem tells how I would had want our relationship (between this girl and me) to had been. Bet in real life… it's not how it seems. This poem may not be as sad as the other ones, and may be a little dumb/funny, but… it still has some influence. *-*I wish it would have been this way. *-* When I first saw you, I thought I was going to die. Specially when, I saw your eyes. I stretched my hands and said, Hi! But you shy, Said bye. Time passed, And we became friends. But in our relationship, There were so such things as ends. You always cared about me, And I could see that on your eyes. And than… There were no good-byes We used to hug, We used to laugh. Everything was so perfect, And you felt protected. As we got to know each other better, We felt in love. And I felt… I was high above. We used to kiss, We used to hug. We used to sleep, On the rug. Everything was a game. There was no pain. And in the rain, We used to go insane. When I hugged you, And putted my hands around your waist. You used to love that, And got a taste. When you were sad, I always gave you my advice. I always tried to be… Nice. I was always there for you. When you needed me the most. Including… When you had no more toast. When we were both around 25 years old, We got married. And that's when I felt, That my past was buried. We had a beautiful family; And I always said: If it wasn't for you, I'll be dead. When it was time to leave this world, We left happy. And showed everyone that or marriage, was no crappie. -The End- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerbell Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 It's interesting to say the least... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 10, 2004 Share Posted September 10, 2004 Well,i thought it was a good poem.It also had some humorous points.Good job. ~meagan~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
under_the_pressure Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 I loved that poem. 1. Because it wasn't depressing like most. (Not saying I don't like those poems but it's good to see a happy one) 2. Because it's romantic. 3. Because it is quite funny! Great job, I really loved that poem...it put a smile on my face. I hope to see more of your work! And showed everyone that or marriage, was no crappie. under* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gauchori Posted September 11, 2004 Author Share Posted September 11, 2004 lol Thanks I should try to make more funny poems. Well.... anyone else have an opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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