PunkPyro912 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 i decided to take a stab at poetry for the first time...so here is the outcome...please tell me what you think even if someone is wrong with it...Thanks "If Only..." If only you could know How much i think ofyou The things in my mind All about you The way ive felt this entire time completely about you I wish it was the same the same for you i wish that you could know everything and the truth but now its too late too late for me too late for you the summers run short and i wont see you again if only you knew if only you knew... Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 i liked it keep it up and as far as getting laid well wait all theings come when we lest supect them. truse be bro i have been in your shose's but now i just feel i could deal with out it . love hurt's and sometime's sucks. don't ever let your heart get invoild when your just looking to get a pieace of pie lol. can i tell you some thing unrealated i don't even go out that much anymore. but they still find me i ant saying i'm some super mac dady or anything just most wemen are drawn to me becuse i am broken deep with in and they don't unstand why i won't let them in . so keep up the good work and never give up hope in time all thing's fall in place good like. Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 If only you knew what? lol joking there... Keep practicing and mabey someday when you write a baook you could give me some credit as well Take care 8) Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 That was a great poem for your first time.Keep writing and you will be even better. To hardcore i dont think that he was hinting that he wanted to get laid.also i dont think that should have even been brought up. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
Protex Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 That was a great poem for your first time.Keep writing and you will be even better. To hardcore i dont think that he was hinting that he wanted to get laid.also i dont think that should have even been brought up. ~Meagan~ Hardcore was referring to Punk's signature. Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 screaming out for understanding and some one has found me thanks hardcore Link to comment
dpressedone89 Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 good poem, keep writing, and that was great for a first try by the way Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 11, 2004 Share Posted September 11, 2004 That was a good poem, not just as a first try but all together...it's good. Keep working at it... ...and about you getting laid...I'm sure you will someday. Don't stress on it too much. under* Link to comment
Tinkerbell Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 You're 13, you have plenty of time to "get laid" Link to comment
Gauchori Posted September 14, 2004 Share Posted September 14, 2004 yeah... listen to her she knows... Link to comment
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