mystery Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 hey, i kinda like this one, but i dont know if its any good. i took the phrase "tear stained lies" from one of my favorite bands because it was really catchy, but i dont know. just tell me what you think about it. thanks a bunch -mystery tear stained lies are all i see crashing down in front of me to help remind that i lost what i never found by sharing my tear stained lies keep it locked within my eyes burn for safety scars will bleed from hatered you hurt me endlessly reminding me of my tear stained lies they will fall again take me away dont stay and say its ok it will all come back in our tear stained lies dont try to comfort dont show me any sympathy dont forget where you hide the one you love you forget about listening our tear stained lies answer yes answer no or just dont answer at all somethings missing its been lost before its been found all our tear stained lies Link to comment
evepm Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 mystery: I like your poem. I think that its message is conveyed very well. If your interested is sharing poems there is a website link removed. Eve Link to comment
under_the_pressure Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 I really enjoyed reading your poem. Good work. under* Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted September 3, 2004 Share Posted September 3, 2004 Bravo.I loved your poem. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
hardcore Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 i liked it good job hardcore Link to comment
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