Borashi Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 Why all the deception, your feelings are hidden beneath your soul Begging to be released, yet your fear has overcome It's consumed your heart, turning you away from love You think its all a game, that I'll always wait for you Now I have to move on cause I'm strong, time marches on Don't ever come back, I'm forever gone If you decide to call, I won't answer You've shattered my world into pieces When I was real, you were fake It was such a mistake, doomed from the start You should've never played with my heart Why all the sadness and despair? You took our love for granted You thought I was a dog that could be played with Don't disrespect me like that, as I'll never look back The realization has sunk in, now your all alone Don't come knocking on my door, begging for more It was great while it lasted, now its burned to ashes Get out of my face, your such a disgrace Now I'm gone, while your left singing a sad song Link to comment
i_hate_the_world47 Posted August 24, 2004 Share Posted August 24, 2004 Wow deep poem.It had aot of emotion.I loved it.Good job. ~Meagan~ Link to comment
unforgiven Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 great job it was very deep unforgiven Link to comment
Stinkweed Posted August 25, 2004 Share Posted August 25, 2004 This poem was great. It was full of deep emotions... Keep up the good work =D> Link to comment
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